An Essay on Hamlet: Appearance vs. Reality
59An Essay on Hamlet: Appearance vs. Reality
Hamlet one of Shakespeare's greatest plays, where the young prince of Denmark must uncover the truth about his fathers death. Hamlet a play that tells the story of a young prince who's father recently died. Hamlets uncle Claudius marries his mother the queen and takes the throne. As the play is told Hamlet finds out his father was murdered by the recently crowned king.
The theme that remains constant throughout the play is appearance versus reality. Things within the play appear to be true and honest but in reality are infested with evil. Many of the characters within the play hide behind a mask of falseness. Four of the main characters that hid behind this mask are Polonius, Rosencrantz (Guildenstern), the king Cluadius.
From behind this mask they give the impression of a person who is sincere and genuine, in reality they are plagued with lies and evil. There appearance will make it very difficult for Hamlet to uncover the truth, the characters hide behind. Polonius the kings royal assistant has a preoccupation with appearance. He always wants to keep up the appearance of loving and caring person. Polonius appears like a man who loves and cares about his son, Laertes. Polonius speaks to his son with advice that sounds sincere but in reality it is rehearsed, hollow and without feeling. Polonius gives his advice only to appear to be the loving caring father.
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There's no thesis statement in the introduction. Also, there are a lot of grammatical errors. The structure of the essay is very disorganized too.
Not liking it.. incomplete and essay structure is all wrong.. not worth the time to read
Thesis is "Four of the main characters that hid behind this mask are Polonius, Rosencrantz (Guildenstern), the king Cluadius."
not completely correct essay format, but good initial idea. i enjoyed reading it, the author should review and keep adding their thoughts to make this complete











bob 2 years ago
The essay writer has a bad sense of organization in what he or she is trying to say. There is no thesis and there are incomplete ideas that remain disconnected to the overall theme. Where's the ending? Where's the conclusion?
In the first paragraph, which should be the introduction, the writer repeats the same fact, the death of Hamlet's father, three times. Also, the marriage of Claudius with Gertrude has nothing to do with the information persuaded in sentences around it.
The second paragraph, which in my opinion should be at the beginning of the essay, finally states the thesis statement. It lacks some transitional words, but except of that it makes sense and the reader can connect himself to the thesis statement.
The beginning of third paragraph is not specific enough. Who are "they"? What mask is "this" mask? Why does he suddenly talk about Hamlet? The writer should prepare the reader for the information about Hamlet by usage of transitional sentences.